This is a very honest and clear reflection of your experiences. You have covered everything needed and the written communication is strong. Your use of examples backs up the points made.
The only elements lacking is the questionnaire and evidence of the responses. Add the graphs and charts and directly quote from more of the feedback. You also need visual evidence to back this up so for the questionnaire respondents points, and yours, use print screens from the ad to demonstrate the points.
Neil,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very honest and clear reflection of your experiences. You have covered everything needed and the written communication is strong. Your use of examples backs up the points made.
The only elements lacking is the questionnaire and evidence of the responses. Add the graphs and charts and directly quote from more of the feedback. You also need visual evidence to back this up so for the questionnaire respondents points, and yours, use print screens from the ad to demonstrate the points.
Ellie